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Hi Carly, I really like your story it's really interesting. I like how you used lots of different sentence types, and the length of the writing. I was just wondering how the spirit animal relates to the writing. What happened to grandma Beth? :) From Bonnie
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Hi Carly, I really like your story it's really interesting. I like how you used lots of different sentence types, and the length of the writing. I was just wondering how the spirit animal relates to the writing. What happened to grandma Beth? :)
ReplyDeleteFrom Bonnie